Bones of the World cover"Wind from a Dying Star" by David D. Levine

Title: "Wind from a Dying Star"
Type: Science Fiction short story
Published in: Bones of the World, anthology edited by Bruce Holland Rogers
Publication date: August 2001
ISBN: 0-9669-6984-7
Publisher: SFF Net Books
Available from: sff.net, your local independent bookseller, amazon.com, and bn.com.

Reprinted in: Space Magic, collection of my short fiction
Publication date: May 2008
ISBN: 978-0-9794054-3-3
Publisher: Wheatland Press
Available from: Wheatland Press and amazon.com

About the Story

This was my first professional sale, and I will always be grateful to Bruce Holland Rogers for giving me my first big break.

This story was written expressly for this anthology, whose theme was "tales from the end of time, when the universe is running down." I started out with the idea of explorers at the very edge of the universe, where space itself grows thin. But as I worked on the story I started thinking what those explorers would be like, what human beings would have evolved into, so far in the future. By the time I was done, the story was entirely about them and what they had become -- the original idea had vanished completely.

Some readers come away thinking that the people in the story are some kind of energy beings. They are actually solid matter, a mix of biological and technological materials, though they use "fields" to manipulate things and "motivators" to get around. Many human inventions are copied from something in nature; for example, the submarine uses the same principles as the chambered nautilus. In this case, these people's bodies are based on naturally-occurring spaceborne organisms which they refer to as "wolves."

Like their bodies, the minds of these people are a seamless blend of natural and artificial intelligence; they call their AI "intuition." They feed on "zeren," or zero-point energy, a form of energy inherent in the structure of space itself. Zero-point energy is a real phenomenon, but in reality there's no way to extract very much energy from it. I have taken the liberty of assuming that these people's bodies are very efficient.

Reviews

"The very promising David D. Levine writes in "Wind from a Dying Star" of a... return, by humans become energy beings, to the place of their birth as a species; it's impressive how tellingly human Levine makes radically distanced states of nostalgia and irretrievable loss."
     -- Nick Gevers, Locus

"'Wind from a Dying Star' by David Levine... posits that humanity will change itself to energy but that even that change will not dissipate a yearning for home before that home is destroyed.... [One of] the more interesting entries in this anthology."
     -- Steven Sawicki, Science Fiction Chronicle

"Mr. Levine does an admirable job of bringing this tale to life and drawing the reader in. A homecoming tale that is sure to tweak a few emotions."
     -- David L. Felts, Tangent Online

Excerpt

Finally a field of zeren appeared at the edges of perception. It was small, and thin, but it was here and it was what they needed. They spread over it eagerly, reveling in the zeren's sweetness. Gunai was too tired to protest when Enaji channeled some of the energy he'd gathered to her; too tired to compliment Teda when she did the same for Old John.

They were all too tired, too hungry, to notice the wolves that circled the field.

They came knifing in from the dark of space, three hard black needles that cut through the tribe with inhuman screams. They lacked intelligence and intuition, but their natural abilities and instincts had been honed by eons of competition with the humans who had copied their bodies, and their hunger was sharp.

The first took Rael, piercing her through the center and carrying her away in one piece. Her cries were cut short before she was out of range. The second came at Gunai, but she dodged and lost only a few percent of her mass to the wolf's raking fields.

The third hit Teda. Hit her hard, tearing away a huge part of her substance. She pinweeled, screaming in agony, fields and mass spewing into the vacuum.

The shock of the impact ran through Gunai, hurting her more than the injury she herself had just suffered. She hurried to Teda's side, shielding her from the wind with her body, soothing her with strokes and healing energies. Teda's screams became whimpers, then began to fade.

"Here they come again!" cried Enaji.


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